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Brannan: A Writer's Workshop
A Writer's Workshop: Crafting Paragraphs, Building Essays
Bob Brannan, Johnson County Community College

Revising Essays

Writing On and Offline

These writing prompts are followed by text boxes for your input. If you are working online and your instructor has given you the go-ahead, you can e-mail your work to him or her by clicking the "E-mail Your Answers" button. You can also e-mail a copy to yourself as a record of your work. If you are working offline, you will have to copy your answers (CTRL-C on most systems) and paste them (CTRL-V) into a text document to retain a record of your work.



1

Directions: Surf to one of the following websites:

CNN.COM

MSNBC.COM

ABCNEWS.COM

Read through several of the articles on the site you choose, using the skills you've gained in editing and proofreading to find grammatical and mechanical errors. Did you find any? If so, what kind? If not, what can you infer about the companies that sponsor these websites?

2

Directions: Find an article on the internet that is of interest to you. It might be an article about sports, about fashion, or about movies. Just pick something you would enjoy reading. Here are some sites at which you might begin your search:

ESPN.com

Cosmopolitan Magazine

Internet Movie Database

Once you've read the article, answer the following questions: Is there a hook? Is there a clear thesis statement? Are all the body paragraphs fully developed? Does the author use concrete details? Does the author use sensory details? Is there a strong conclusion?