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Revising and Editing

Edit and rewrite the following paragraph. Look for problems in the following:


  • using and to connect phrases
  • using also to add information
  • using but and so to connect ideas
  • using the simple present tense

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      David a new student in our school. he from Colombia. David likes sports. He plays baseball and he plays tennis. Also he is a musician. He likes the piano. He doesn't like to perform. David is happy in his school, so he misses his friends.







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