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Interactions 2 Writing, 4/e
Cheryl Pavlik
Margaret Keenan Segal
City Life

Editing Practice

Edit and rewrite the following paragraph. Pay particular attention to:

  • giving reasons with since
  • subjects of sentences
  • run-on sentences
  • reasons with because, so, therefore
  • paragraph format
  • present tense
  • the verb be
  • pronouns




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My apartment not wonderful, it very tiny therefore I not have much money. It have a very small kitchen, is only big enough for one person. It have one other room, is the living room and the bedroom too. It have one good thing. It have a big window because it very sunny.








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