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Review Exercise One: An Avalanche of Toys
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Rewrite the following story to correct all errors in grammar, spelling and punctuation. There are sixteen errors.

When you are done, click the "Show Answer" button and compare your answer to the correct answer.

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Children have to many toys say psychologists. A study by the Mallory College Psychology Center released today says an abundence of toys can cause problems. Such as overstimulation and desentivization. "Children are being buried under a tide of toys" said Alfred Kraft director of the Center. The tide of toys he said results in loss of concentration and this loss can impede the developement of brain cells. "Why do parents buy so many toys" he asked? "Guilt they feel guilty unless they acommodate their children. Its a vicous cycle. Parents dont want to deny love and so they overdo."







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