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Exercise 3-4.2
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Quizzes: How to Revise > Deleting redundancy

Journalists place great value in conciseness. Compress the following by cutting repetitive words and phrases.

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The police chief indicated that securing the building was an absolute necessity.
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The next step is to consider all of the prospective suspects and classify them into groups.
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The engineer disassembled the mechanism into its component parts.
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His professional résumé includes both a comprehensive list of places he has worked and a list of his educational credentials, including his bachelor's and master's degrees.
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Thomas ran the program in four 30-minute sessions, from 9 a.m. to 9:30 a.m., from 9:30 a.m. to 10 a.m., from 10 a.m. to 10:30 a.m., and from 10:30 a.m. to 11 a.m.
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The meeting is scheduled to be held at 10:30 a.m. in the grand ballroom.
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Katrina was the most powerful hurricane in recorded history ever to strike New Orleans.
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A violent explosion ripped apart the gas station.
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The team's star player had never before spoken to the general public.
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Over time it became patently obvious that little Elmer was now nothing but a lifeless corpse.







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