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Intermediate Practice Exercises - Eliminating Redundancies
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1
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)He is the strongest weightlifter of the five weight lifters we met.
B)He is the strongest weightlifter of the five we met.
C)We met five weightlifters; he is the strongest we met.
2
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)Of the three cars, I own the oldest car.
B)Of the three cars, one of which I own, mine is the oldest.
C)I own the oldest of the three cars.
3
Click on the clearest, most concise passage.
A)Last night we had dinner with Dimitri and Hilda. Dimitri and Hilda told us that they want to become citizens.
B)Last night we had dinner with Dimitri and Hilda. They told us that they want to become citizens.
C)Last night we had dinner with Dimitri and Hilda. They told us last night that they want to become citizens.
4
Click on the clearest, most concise passage.
A)Rosario's Brazilian and Portuguese clients speak the same language.
B)Rosario does business with Brazilian and Portuguese clients. Brazil and Portugal share the same language.
C)Rosario does business with Brazilian and Portuguese clients. His clients speak the same language.
5
Click on the clearest, most concise passage.
A)My history professor has scheduled the midterm in history. It covers the French Revolution.
B)My history professor has scheduled the midterm test. The midterm covers the French Revolution.
C)My history professor has scheduled the midterm, which covers the French Revolution.
6
Click on the clearest, most concise passage.
A)The desk was covered with papers and half-eaten sandwiches.
B)The desk was covered with junk. The junk included papers and half-eaten sandwiches.
C)The desk was covered with junk. On the desk were papers and half-eaten sandwiches.
7
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)He arrived just in time to catch the departing train.
B)He promptly arrived just in time to catch the departing train.
C)He arrived just in time to catch the departing train as it left the station.
8
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)She worked as an employee in a lingerie store.
B)She worked in a lingerie store that sold underwear.
C)She worked in a lingerie store.
9
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)Every day, she got up daily before sunrise.
B)She got up before sunrise very early in the morning.
C)She got up before sunrise every day.
10
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)Experience tells me I should not shop for groceries at this particular store.
B)Experience tells me I should not shop at this grocery store.
C)Past experience tells me I should not shop for groceries at this store.







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