Revising Essays: Reviewing the Bases
Directions: This activity will help familiarize you with the bases of revising essays. First, visit any or all of the following sites and locate an essay that interests you.
The New York Times Magazine
The Atlantic Monthly
Feed Magazine
Salon Magazine
New Scientist
The Smithsonian
Then, address the following:
Activity 1: Analyzing Unity
To analyze unity, identify the single most important point that is advanced in the essay.
Activity 2: Analyzing Support
To analyze support, discuss the specific evidence used to bolster the main point.
Activity 3: Analyzing Coherence
To analyze coherence, cut and paste all the transitional words you can find in the essay.