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Mosaic 1 Writing, 4/e
Laurie Blass
Meredith Pike-Baky

Money Matters

Organizing a Coherent Paragraph

Put the following sentences in order from 2 to 9 to make a coherent paragraph. The first sentence is done for you.


________1________ Skinny, shy, and awkward, teenaged Bill Gates seemed an unlikely successor to his very successful parents.



1

While he showed enormous talent for math and logic, young Bill was no one's idea of a future billionaire who would reinvent American business.
2

His father was a well-known Seattle attorney, and his popular mother served on many charitable boards.
3

Still shy and awkward, he never went to parties without his friend Steve Ballmer, whom he later repaid by naming him president of Microsoft.
4

One day in December, 1974, Paul Allen, a friend of Gates, showed him a picture of a $397 computer from M.I.T.S. Computing that any hobbyist could build.
5

Gates and Allen contacted the head of M.I.T.S. and said they could provide software for the computer, and thus Microsoft was born.
6

Gates set off for Harvard University planning to become a lawyer like his father.
7

The only thing the computer lacked, besides a keyboard and monitor, was software.
8

In his junior year, Gates dropped out of Harvard to work full-time on his new company.