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Activity 3: Polishing Thesis Sentences Directions: Practice revising the following rough thesis sentences to make them more effective, underlining any specific words, action words, or details that you add.
Use this sentence as a model:
Rough sentence: Dress is important during job interviews.
Revised sentence: Dressing neatly for interviews creates a good first impression that can help a candidate land a good job.
1. Summer is prime travel season. 2. Divorce rates are increasing nowadays. 3. Immigrants encountered many hardships at Ellis Island.
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