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Brannan: A Writer's Workshop
A Writer's Workshop: Crafting Paragraphs, Building Essays
Bob Brannan, Johnson County Community College

Introducing the Paragraph

Writing On and Offline



Having a strong thesis is an important first step. Practice developing a thesis that is neither too broad nor too narrow for each of the following subjects. The first two have been completed for you.
General SubjectLimited SubjectThesis
MarriageHoneymoonA honeymoon is perhaps the worst way to begin a marriage.
SportsPlayers' SalariesHigh players' salaries are bad for the game, for the fans, and for the values our children are developing.



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1. FamilySiblings 
2. TelevisionViolent Programming
3. SchoolMaking Friends
4. The College ExperienceBalancing Fun and Schoolwork
5. AuthorityParents

Supporting your thesis with specific evidence is an important second step in the process of writing an essay. Practice this skill by finding an online review of one of your favorite movies.



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  1. What is the author's thesis? How is the thesis backed up with specific evidence?
  2. Do you agree or disagree with the reviewer's opinion? Structure your answer so that
  3. your own thesis and supporting details are clear.