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A.Cemetery

     The news story structure is:

Lead that contains the most important fact or facts.

Body that contains:

  • Material that amplifies and buttresses the lead.
  • Background information.
  • Secondary facts or information.

     Clip a local news story from the most recent issue of the newspaper you read and break it down into its basic structure. Here is an example of how you might do it with the use of a lettering system.

     The city zoning board yesterday approved the construction of a 10-foot-high chain-link fence around the Temple B'nai Shalom cemetery to keep out vandals.

Lead—A

     But the board denied the congregation's request for a barbed wire at the top of the fence because the cemetery, at 1282 Airport Road, is in a residential zone.

Amplification of lead—A1

     "The fence is not worth anything to us without the barbed wire," William Gamm, a lawyer for the congregation, said last night.

Amplification of lead—A2

     Mr. Gamm said that young people are using the cemetery as a shortcut to the GoldMart Shopping Center at 1300 Airport Road and that unless an impenetrable fence is erected graves will be desecrated.

Amplification of lead—A3

     The temple made its request for the fence last month following the discovery by members of the congregation of several overturned grave markers.

Background

     In other actions, the zoning board acted on the following requests:

Secondary material

     Barry Tobin, 112 Bismark St., use of first and second floors as massage parlor—postponed.

Secondary fact—B

     Raymond Feeney, 167 Kentucky Ave., remove one-story rear addition and erect three-story rear addition—approved.

Secondary fact—C

     Daniel Snead, 481 Yale Ave., use of first floor as private club—disapproved.

Secondary fact—D

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B. Comparison

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     Contrast stories that use the inverted pyramid and the storytelling form. What conclusions can you draw about why each form was used for the stories you selected?








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