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Intermediate Practice Exercises - Parallelism
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1
Choose the sentence that is not parallel.
A)The relatives of the bride and groom, members of the wedding party, and friends of both families waited patiently.
B)The relatives of the bride and groom, the wedding party members, and both families' friends waited patiently.
C)The bride and groom's relatives, the wedding party, and friends waited patiently.
2
Choose the sentence that is not parallel.
A)We had a snowball fight, took a walk, and were enjoying riding a sleigh.
B)We had a snowball fight, took a walk, and enjoyed a sleigh ride.
C)We had a snowball fight, took a walk, and rode a sleigh.
3
Choose the sentence that is not parallel.
A)We settled down into our coach seats, anticipating comfort, peace, and quiet.
B)We settled down into our coach seats, anticipating to be comfortable, peace, and quiet.
C)We settled down into our coach seats, anticipating comfort, to be peaceful, and quiet.
4
Choose the sentence that is not parallel.
A)Can you imagine undergoing a frightening operation and being hospitalized for twelve days?
B)Can you imagine undergoing a frightening operation and to be hospitalized for twelve days?
C)Can you imagine what it would be like to undergo a frightening operation and to be hospitalized for twelve days?
5
Choose the sentence that is not parallel.
A)As I fell asleep, I heard the doctors giving orders, the instruments humming, and the nurses whispering.
B)As I fell asleep, I heard the doctors give orders, the instruments hum, and the nurses whisper.
C)As I fell asleep, I heard the doctors giving orders, the instruments hum, and the nurses whisper.
6
Choose the sentence that is not parallel.
A)To save time when I drive to work, I turn left, I cross the bridge, and I take the Don Valley Parkway.
B)To save time when I drive to work, I turn left, cross the bridge, and taking the Don Valley Parkway.
C)To save time when I drive to work, the trick is to turn left, to cross the bridge, and to take the Don Valley Parkway.
7
Choose the sentence that is not parallel.
A)The king did not die of old age: he was strangled, or someone poisoned him.
B)The king did not die of old age: he was either strangled or poisoned.
C)The king did not die of old age: he was strangled, or he was poisoned.
8
Choose the sentence that is not parallel.
A)We knocked on the door, rang the bell, and shouting at the top of our lungs on our third attempt, but nobody was home.
B)We knocked on the door, rang the bell, and shouted at the top of our lungs, but nobody was home.
C)We tried knocking on the door, ringing the bell, and shouting at the top of our lungs, but nobody was home.
9
Choose the sentence that is not parallel.
A)Michael sighed, laughed, and tears were coming down his face when he watched movies of a family reunion.
B)Michael sighed, laughed, and cried when he watched movies of a family reunion.
C)Michael was sighing, laughing, and crying when he watched movies of a family reunion.
10
Choose the sentence that is not parallel.
A)The Halloween decorations included black-clothed witches, white ghosts, and greenish goblins.
B)The Halloween decorations included witches dressed in black, white ghosts, and greenish goblins.
C)The Halloween decorations included witches dressed in black, ghosts made of white sheets, and goblins with greenish flesh.







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