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Advanced Practice Exercises - Eliminating Redundancies
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1
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)India, Pakistan, Tibet, and Nepal are home to the Himalayas, the tallest mountains in the world.
B)India, Pakistan, Tibet, and Nepal are home to the Himalayan mountains. The Himalayas are the tallest mountains in the world.
C)India, Pakistan, Tibet, and Nepal are home to the Himalayan mountains, which are, in point of fact, the tallest in the world.
2
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)Canada signed the North American Free Trade Agreement with Mexico and the United States, which are very close commercial partners of Canada.
B)Canada signed the North American Free Trade Agreement with two of its closest commercial partners: Mexico and the United States.
C)Canada signed the North American Free Trade Agreement treaty with Mexico and the United States. Mexico and the United States are two of Canada's closest commercial partners.
3
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)Henry Ford developed the first automotive assembly line in the United States.
B)Henry Ford developed the first automotive plant to build cars the United States.
C)Henry Ford developed the first assembly line for the purpose of building cars in United States.
4
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)The chemistry instructor combined the liquids together.
B)The chemistry instructor combined the liquids.
C)The chemistry instructor combined the chemicals, in liquid form, together.
5
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)The painting is totally without value.
B)The painting is without value.
C)The painting is worthless and without value.
6
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)We need to practice fundamentals.
B)We need to practice fundamentals important to the discipline.
C)We need to practice the most basic fundamentals.
7
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)Iago is the evil villain in Shakespeare's tragedy Othello.
B)Iago is the villain in Shakespeare's play Othello, a tragedy.
C)Iago is the villain in Shakespeare's tragedy Othello.
8
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)In Hamlet's honest opinion, something was rotten in Denmark.
B)In Hamlet's opinion, something was rotten in Denmark.
C)Hamlet thought that something was rotten in Denmark, in his opinion.
9
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)He is a committed worker but a slow plodder.
B)He is a dedicated, committed worker but a plodder.
C)He is a dedicated worker but a plodder.
10
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)She accused him of being a messy slob as she dripped jelly on her clean shirt.
B)She accused him of being a slob as she dripped jelly on her clean shirt.
C)As she dripped jelly on her immaculately clean shirt, she accused him of being a slob.
11
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)One of the world's most prolific and productive writers, France's Honor� Balzac published nearly eighty novels and stories.
B)One of the world's most prolific writers in all of literature, France's Honor� Balzac published nearly eighty novels and stories.
C)One of the world's most prolific writers, France's Honor� Balzac published nearly eighty novels and stories.
12
Click on the clearest, most concise passage.
A)Gustave Flaubert's Madame Bovary was first published in serial form in La Revue de Paris, episode by episode. A story of illicit love, the work was condemned by the authorities, and Flaubert was tried for immorality.
B)Gustave Flaubert's Madame Bovary was first published in serial form in La Revue de Paris. A story of illicit love, the work was condemned by the authorities, and Flaubert was tried for immorality.
C)Gustave Flaubert's Madame Bovary was first published in serial form in La Revue de Paris. A story of illicit love, the work was condemned and censured by the authorities, and Flaubert was tried for immorality.







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