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1
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)The fatal accident was a terrible tragedy.
B)The fatal accident, in which a person died, was a tragedy.
C)The fatal accident was a tragedy.
2
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A)The tools he bought are essential.
B)The tools he bought are essential to complete the job.
C)The tools he bought are absolutely essential.
3
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A)The money is spent.
B)All of the money is completely spent.
C)The money is completely spent in its entirety.
4
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A)We heard the doorbell.
B)We heard the doorbell ringing.
C)We heard the sound of the doorbell.
5
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A)The large crow flew in the air over the mountain.
B)The large crow flew over the mountain.
C)The enormous, large crow flew over the mountain.
6
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A)The desk was covered with papers and half-eaten sandwiches.
B)The desk was covered with junk. The junk included papers and half-eaten sandwiches.
C)The desk was covered with junk. On the desk were papers and half-eaten sandwiches.
7
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A)He arrived just in time to catch the departing train.
B)He promptly arrived just in time to catch the departing train.
C)He arrived just in time to catch the departing train as it left the station.
8
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A)She worked as an employee in a lingerie store.
B)She worked in a lingerie store that sold underwear.
C)She worked in a lingerie store.
9
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A)Every day, she got up daily before sunrise.
B)She got up before sunrise very early in the morning.
C)She got up before sunrise every day.
10
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A)Experience tells me I should not shop for groceries at this particular store.
B)Experience tells me I should not shop at this grocery store.
C)Past experience tells me I should not shop for groceries at this store.
11
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A)He made a rough estimate of the final cost.
B)He made an estimate of the approximate final cost.
C)He estimated the final cost.
12
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A)Iago is the evil villain in Shakespeare's tragedy Othello.
B)Iago is the villain in Shakespeare's play Othello, a tragedy.
C)Iago is the villain in Shakespeare's tragedy Othello.
13
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A)In Hamlet's honest opinion, something was rotten in Denmark.
B)In Hamlet's opinion, something was rotten in Denmark.
C)Hamlet thought that something was rotten in Denmark, in his opinion.
14
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A)He is a committed worker but a slow plodder.
B)He is a dedicated, committed worker but a plodder.
C)He is a dedicated worker but a plodder.
15
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A)She accused him of being a messy slob as she dripped jelly on her clean shirt.
B)She accused him of being a slob as she dripped jelly on her clean shirt.
C)As she dripped jelly on her immaculately clean shirt, she accused him of being a slob.
16
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A)Please refer back to the chart on page 33.
B)Please refer to the chart on page 33.
C)Please refer to the chart back on page 33.
17
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A)After winning the Super7 lottery jackpot, they moved into a mansion.
B)After winning the Super7 lottery jackpot, they moved into a large mansion.
C)After winning a lot of money in the Super7 lottery jackpot, they moved into a mansion.
18
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A)Only wealthy millionaires can afford an automobile like a Rolls-Royce.
B)Only millionaires can afford a Rolls-Royce.
C)Only millionaires can afford a Rolls-Royce automobile.
19
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A)Your education will prove to be an asset in the future.
B)Your education will prove to be a valuable asset.
C)Your education will prove to be an asset.
20
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)Frederick II of southern Italy is one of the best-known early Italian rulers.
B)Frederick II is one of the best-known early Italian rulers.
C)Frederick II is one of the best-known rulers of all the early Italian rulers.







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