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1
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)The car was travelling at an unsafe speed that was dangerous.
B)The car was travelling at an unsafe speed.
C)The car was travelling at an unsafe speed, posing a real danger.
2
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)He noticed that the closed door was shut.
B)He noticed that the door was shut.
C)He noticed that the door, which was closed, was shut.
3
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)Selina carefully opened the door cautiously.
B)Selina carefully and cautiously opened the door.
C)Selina carefully opened the door.
4
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)He normally calls the aged, old woman on Monday.
B)Usually he normally calls the old woman on Monday.
C)Usually, he calls the old woman on Monday.
5
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)They walked quickly around the track quite fast.
B)They quickly walked around the circular track.
C)They walked quickly around the track.
6
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)She gets up early every morning at dawn.
B)She gets up early every morning.
C)She always gets up early every morning.
7
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)The newborn calf stood up on its feet.
B)Just born, the newborn calf stood up.
C)The newborn calf stood up.
8
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)I usually wake up from sleeping by 7:00 a.m.
B)I usually wake up by 7:00 a.m.
C)I usually wake up by 7:00 a.m. in the morning.
9
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)The horse fell into a hole.
B)The horse fell down into a hole below him.
C)The horse fell into an empty hole.
10
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A)He was a dishonest liar.
B)He never told the truth.
C)He was a liar who never told the truth.
11
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)He is the strongest weightlifter of the five weightlifters we met.
B)He is the strongest weightlifter of the five we met.
C)We met five weightlifters; he is the strongest we met.
12
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)Of the three cars, I own the oldest car.
B)Of the three cars, one of which I own, mine is the oldest.
C)I own the oldest of the three cars.
13
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)Last night we had dinner with Dimitri and Hilda. Dimitri and Hilda told us that they want to become citizens.
B)Last night we had dinner with Dimitri and Hilda. They told us that they want to become citizens.
C)Last night we had dinner with Dimitri and Hilda. They told us last night that they want to become citizens.
14
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)Rosario's Brazilian and Portuguese clients speak the same language.
B)Rosario does business with Brazilian and Portuguese clients. Brazil and Portugal share the same language.
C)Rosario does business with Brazilian and Portuguese clients. His clients speak the same language.
15
Click on the clearest, most concise passage.
A)My history professor has scheduled the midterm in history. It covers the French Revolution.
B)My history professor has scheduled the midterm. The midterm covers the French Revolution.
C)My history professor has scheduled the midterm, which covers the French Revolution.
16
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)India, Pakistan, Tibet, and Nepal are home to the Himalayas, the tallest mountains in the world.
B)India, Pakistan, Tibet, and Nepal are home to the Himalayan mountains. The Himalayas are the tallest mountains in the world.
C)India, Pakistan, Tibet, and Nepal are home to the Himalayan mountains. The Himalayas are, in point of fact, the tallest mountains in the world.
17
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)Canada signed the North American Free Trade Agreement with Mexico and the United States, which are very close commercial partners of Canada.
B)Canada signed the North American Free Trade Agreement with two of its closest commercial partners: Mexico and the United States.
C)Canada signed the North American Free Trade Agreement treaty with Mexico and the United States. Mexico and the United States are two of Canada's closest commercial partners.
18
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)Henry Ford developed the first automotive assembly line in the United States.
B)Henry Ford developed the first automotive plant to build cars the United States.
C)Henry Ford developed the first assembly line for the purpose of building cars in United States.
19
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)The chemistry instructor combined the liquids together.
B)The chemistry instructor combined the liquids.
C)The chemistry instructor combined the chemicals, in liquid form, together.
20
Click on the clearest, most concise sentence.
A)The painting is totally without value.
B)The painting is without value.
C)The painting is worthless and without value.







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